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7.1 The DIRECT Method for CLT Grammar & Writing
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7. Grammar & Writing

The DIRECT Method for CLT Grammar & Writing

Introduction

The DIRECT Method for approaching CLT Grammar & Writing accounts for the fact that your task in this section is to repair a writing passage more than to read and interpret it. Even though sometimes the “NO CHANGE” answer will be correct, in the majority of cases the underlined portion of text has an error of grammar or expression. So it doesn’t make sense to read the passage in its entirety first; it’s better to zoom in on each underlined bit of text and then zoom out as much as necessary to understand it.

By approaching CLT Grammar & Writing with the DIRECT method, you will improve both your efficiency and your accuracy.

The DIRECT Method

The DIRECT Method guides you through a sequential process for approaching each question, though the first step is more of a direction that underlies how you approach each passage rather than individual questions.

Don’t read the passage first.

  1. You are proofreading. Reading for meaning might cause you to correct obvious errors subconsciously.
  2. When asked about content, save time by only reading what is necessary.

Identify important material if there is a stated question.

  1. Read carefully the stated question before the answer choices, including any reproduced text.
  2. Note especially any words or phrases that tell you exactly what the question is looking for, such as “clearest and most concise” or “tone”.

Read for context.

  1. Always read the entire sentence.
  2. Read around transitions (at least the sentence before and after).
  3. Questions that ask about rhetorical strength or logical coherence may involve skimming all or part of the passage.

Examine the structure of the answers.

  1. Ask yourself how the answers differ from one another. The question may not be asking you to do the kind of editing that you think you need to do.
  2. Refer to length. Shorter is almost always better.

Choose the answer that best fits the context and, if applicable, the stated question.

  1. Don’t be afraid to answer NO CHANGE!
  2. Read your answer back into the sentence to “check your work.”

Take time to review any questions you’ve flagged as difficult.

  1. Each passage has one or two broader questions that will be difficult to answer if you’ve only been focusing on grammar.
  2. If you have extra time: Read all of your answers back into the text to ensure they make sense.

Practice Mini-Passage

The passage below is shorter than a real CLT Grammar & Writing passage; all of the questions here are condensed into a single paragraph. This passage is from A Voice from the South by Anna Julia Cooper, reprinted by HathiTrust.

It is because I believe the American people to be [1] conscientious committed to a fair trial and [2] unreadable evidence, and because I feel it essential to a perfect understanding and an equitable verdict [3] so that truth from each standpoint be presented at the bar, that [4] this little voice has been added to the already full chorus. The “other side” has not been represented by one who “lives there.” And not many can more sensibly realize or more accurately tell the weight and the fret of the “long dull pain” than the open-eyed but [5] hitherto voiceless Black Woman of America.

1. conscientious

A. NO CHANGE
B. conscientiousness
C. conscientiously
D. conscience

(spoiler)

The answer is C. Because we need something to modify the participle (verbal adjective) “committed”, we’re looking for an adverb. (Adverbs modify verbs, adjectives, or other adverbs.) Choice C fits the bill, and no other choice offers an adverb. The DIRECT method tells us to “Examine the structure of the answers”; doing so here shows us that we have multiple part-of-speech forms of the same word (choice D being slightly different). This recognition points us to identifying the part of speech as the central task here.

2. unreadable

A. NO CHANGE
B. ungarbled
C. unsympathetic
D. unwritten

(spoiler)

The answer is B. “Garbled” means hard to discern or understand, so “ungarbled” must mean clear and unmistakable. This fits the context because, in parallel with a “fair trial,” the author would want any evidence to be clear. “Unreadable” would be the opposite of clear; unsympathetic has a negative connotation that doesn’t fit here, and something “unwritten,” while it could possibly be clear, is certainly not clear by its very nature. The DIRECT method’s encouragement to “Read the context,” at minimum the whole sentence in which the underlined portion is found, helps us gather sufficient hints to point us toward choice B and away from the other choices.

3. so that

A. NO CHANGE
B. that
C. because
D. so

(spoiler)

The answer is B. The sentence structure is quite complicated. It first looks like we need to go back to the word “because” as the real beginning of this clause, but that “because” is parallel to “It is because” all the way back at the beginning of the sentence. To answer questions like this, it is crucial to strip away unnecessary words and phrases to get at that basic structure. The whole clause here is set up by “It is because …” So certainly another “because” wouldn’t make sense. What do we say after “It is because …”? That is the word we’re looking for. This would be a good question on which to follow the last step of DIRECT and read our answer back in, since the sentence is so long; reading it silently with the right answer in mind should confirm our understanding.

4. Which of the following choices represents the clearest and most concise way to convey all the information in this clause?

this little voice has been added to the already full chorus.

A. NO CHANGE
B. this voice has spoken.
C. this unassuming voice is speaking in a way that adds to a chorus of many people.
D. the already full chorus of voice has been added to by this little voice.

(spoiler)

The answer is A. Using the DIRECT method, we put special emphasis on the stated question here, particularly the words “clearest and most concise.” On the one hand, we can get rid of choices that are not concise; unusually long answers like C and D are almost always ripe to be eliminated. But we also need to be clear, and the CLT is implying in that direction that we cannot take away meaning from the sentence. So although choice B is quite concise, it removes the sense the author gives us of speaking to an issue when others have already spoken. Answer A avoids unnecessary wording but retains the meaning.

5. hitherto

A. hitherto
B. henceforth
C. presently
D eternally

(spoiler)

The answer is A. As is often true on the CLT, the language is a little bit archaic. We don’t often use words like “hitherto” and “henceforth”, so perhaps we can use the context and work by elimination. As we emphasize in CLT Verbal Reasoning, the word “but” is always important. The word we’re looking for here, when paired with “voiceless”, needs to establish a contrast with someone who is “open-eyed.” Someone “open-eyed” is vigilant and aware, and that seems to already contrast with “voiceless”, so there must also be a contrast in time. If the author is open-eyed in the present, then neither choice C nor choice D would offer a contrast by presenting a time different from the present. “Henceforth” means “from this time onward”; in the context, it wouldn’t make sense for Cooper to be suggesting that she is speaking now but somehow will become voiceless right away and in the future. The context suggests that Black women in America were voiceless in the past; since “hitherto” means “up to now” or “before this moment,” it fits best. The DIRECT method tells us not to be afraid of NO CHANGE, which suits our answer here! It can be easy to fall into the trap of thinking you always have to change the underlined portion, but NO CHANGE will occupy its share of the correct answer pool.

For Reflection

  1. How well do you understand the DIRECT Method? If you have doubts, write it down in your own words and check your understanding with the outline in this lesson.
  2. Rate the difficulty of CLT Grammar & Writing for you from 1 (no problem) to 5 (problem!). This will help you decide how much time to spend preparing for this section.
  3. Do you need to refresh your grammar skills? Punctuation is a good place to start. This guide from Khan Academy is targeted at the SAT but applies well to the CLT also.