Relative pronouns and relative clauses
Relative pronouns introduce modifying clauses to nouns and pronouns, telling us more about them. They can refer to people, things, or both.
| Refers to | Relative pronouns |
|---|---|
| People | who, whom |
| Things | which |
| Both | whose, that |
Who/whom
Who and whom refer to people (and sometimes to pets with names).
Use who when the pronoun is the subject of its clause—it’s the one performing the action. Use whom when the pronoun is an object, whether of a verb or of a preposition. A quick test: if he fits in place of the pronoun, use who; if him fits, use whom.
Example:
Esteban is the man who introduced the happy couple.
(He introduced the happy couple, so who is correct.)
Example:
In To Kill a Mockingbird, Jem, Scout, and Dill are fascinated by Boo Radley, a recluse about whom little is known.
(Little is known about him, so whom is correct.)
Example:
Esteban is the coach whom everyone admired.
(Everyone admired him, so whom is correct.)
Whoever and whomever follow the same test, applied inside their own clause. What matters is the pronoun’s job in its clause, not the word in front of the clause.
Examples:
Give the award to whoever finishes first.
(He finishes first, so whoever is correct, even though the clause follows the preposition to.)
Invite whomever you like.
(You like him, so whomever is correct.)
Who(m)/which
Which refers to things and ideas. Animals generally take that or which, not who.
Examples:
INCORRECT: Students which earn all A’s are on the honor roll.
CORRECT: Students who earn all A’s are on the honor roll.
LESS PREFERRED: Dogs who are hard to train may respond well to treats given for good behavior.
PREFERRED: Dogs that are hard to train may respond well to treats given for good behavior.
Practice question
Leslie, who was usually an efficient worker, found that she had the attention span of a flea who had drunk too much espresso when it came to studying relative pronouns.
a. NO CHANGE
b. Leslie, that was usually an efficient worker, found that she had the attention span of a flea that had drunk too much espresso when it came to studying relative pronouns.
c. Leslie, who was usually an efficient worker, found that she had the attention span of a flea that had drunk too much espresso when it came to studying relative pronouns.
d. Leslie, who was usually an efficient worker, found that she had the attention span of a flea, which had drunk too much espresso when it came to studying relative pronouns.
e. Leslie, which was usually an efficient worker, found that she had the attention span of a flea that had drunk too much espresso when it came to studying relative pronouns.
Correct answer:
The correct answer is
c.
c. is correct. The two relative clauses, who was usually an efficient worker and that had drunk too much espresso, both correctly match the nouns they modify.
a. is incorrect because a flea is not a person. The sentence should say a flea that had.
b. is incorrect because the clause about Leslie is set off by commas (nonessential), and that cannot introduce a nonessential clause. Use who for a person.
d. is incorrect because the comma plus which marks the clause as nonessential. The information about the flea is essential, and an essential clause takes that with no comma.
e. is incorrect because which never refers to people. It should be changed to who.
Whose
Although it looks like it would only refer to people, whose is the possessive form of both who and which.
Examples:
Anyone whose desk is not all cleaned up will have to stay inside during recess.
Jessica will only eat apples whose skin is completely unblemished.
Don’t confuse whose (possessive) with who’s (a contraction of who is or who has). If you can’t replace the word with who is or who has, use whose.
Which/that
That introduces essential clauses and never has a comma before it.
Used by itself, which introduces nonessential clauses and has a comma before it. After a preposition (in which, through which, by which), which can introduce an essential clause with no comma. That can never follow a preposition.
Examples:
LESS PREFERRED: The books which Meagan wanted to buy were in two large stacks at the checkout counter.
PREFERRED: The books that Meagan wanted to buy were in two large stacks at the checkout counter.
INCORRECT: Melissa’s front yard, that was a muddy mess when she moved in, was now a beautiful flower garden.
CORRECT: Melissa’s front yard, which was a muddy mess when she moved in, was now a beautiful flower garden.
Practice question
Six-year-old Tommy, whose mom took him, dressed as Batman, to the movies to see Spider-Man, was hailed from across the theater when Stuart recognized his bat ears, which are iconic.
a. NO CHANGE
b. Six-year-old Tommy, whose mom took him, dressed as Batman, to the movies to see Spider-Man, was hailed from across the theater when Stuart recognized his bat ears, that are iconic.
c. Six-year-old Tommy, who’s mom took him, dressed as Batman, to the movies to see Spider-Man, was hailed from across the theater when Stuart recognized his bat ears, which are iconic.
d. Six-year-old Tommy, whose mom took him, dressed as Batman, to the movies to see Spider-Man, was hailed from across the theater when Stuart recognized his bat ears, who are iconic.
e. Six-year-old Tommy, which mom took him, dressed as Batman, to the movies to see Spider-Man, was hailed from across the theater when Stuart recognized his bat ears, which are iconic.
Correct answer:
The correct answer is a. NO CHANGE.
a. is correct. Whose is the possessive that links Tommy to his mom, and which introduces the nonessential clause about his bat ears.
b. is incorrect because that can only introduce an essential clause. The comma indicates that the clause is nonessential, so which is required.
c. is incorrect because who’s means who is. It should be whose.
d. is incorrect because who only refers to people. It should be which.
e. is incorrect because which is not possessive. Only whose is correct.
When/where, preposition + which, and whereby
- When refers only to time and time periods.
- Where refers only to locations.
- When which follows a preposition, it can replace when or where.
- Whereby means by which or according to which.
The following sentence pair shows how to replace a relative pronoun with the preposition + which construction:
Examples:
The Renaissance was an era when art, literature, and science flourished.
The Renaissance was an era in which art, literature, and science flourished.
Practice question
The tunnel through which one must pass is guarded by six enemy troops, three of which are awake at any time.
a. NO CHANGE
b. The tunnel through which one must pass is guarded by six enemy troops, three of whom are awake at any time.
c. The tunnel through that one must pass is guarded by six enemy troops, three of whom are awake at any time.
d. The tunnel through which one must pass is guarded by six enemy troops, three whereby are awake at any time.
e. The tunnel through which one must pass is guarded by six enemy troops, three of who are awake at any time.
Correct answer:
The correct answer is
b.
b. is correct. Both relative clauses, through which one must pass and three of whom are awake at any time, are correctly worded.
a. is incorrect because troops are people, so which should be changed to whom.
c. is incorrect because there is no preposition + that construction in English. It should be through which.
d. is incorrect because whereby means by which and does not fit the sentence.
e. is incorrect because who follows the preposition of, so it must take the object form, whom.